

THIS BOOK HAS MORE FLUFF THAN FACTS
Remarkable - a FAMILY history, featuring women's voices

worst book ever: what NOT to doFirst of all, every character completely one-dimensional and/or a stereotype. (Here's a hint: just because a character double-crosses someone doesn't make them more complex!)
Secondly, the plot hinges on a few very unlikely coincidences, just in the first couple of chapters. The worst one is the assumption Rachel makes about her husband - that he won't look for her. Even if the FBI hadn't gotten wind of the electronic theft, chances are Jeff would have gone to Manhattan to look for her.
Thirdly, when one is describing a character's thoughts, it's just bad writing to have them say something, think the same thing, and then, later, do something totally different.
Fourthly, just because a concierge does one thing doesn't necessarily mean we need to know all about him. Same for cab drivers. Congratulations to the author, he can write nice vignettes about incidental characters. Totally unnecessary for the plot; it just drags things.
Finally, the sappy ending just made me want to puke.
With another revision or two, and an actual editor, the story could have been much more interesting. The plot itself wasn't too bad, and the action was gripping (except when it stopped short). But that alone does not a good book make.
A "Johnny Come Lately" ReportI have passed the original purloined copy to a bunch of my friends, who all agree that we recognize the same characteristics of the "bad guy" in one particular member of our group.
This novel really rocks.







